Good job.
decent work overall- the sound was a little distorted - if you do another like this, consider normalizing/lowering the volume just a hair. There was just a bit of distortion but that may also be from the compression.
Great song from a great album. You did a good job with the imagery to accompany the lyrics.
Keep it up!
And your lucky to get the "1"...
Man I've seen some pointless, crappy, non-substantial wastes of bandwidth in my time ... and this was one of them...
I didn't laugh, I didn't cry - it stank and it sucked...
yeah yeah yeah I know I know - just like my mom right? - well if you do decide to rant back at me then at least make it a good one!
Why would I rant. Your speaking the truth LOL
Solid submission...
All around good submission - not bad at all, but I agree with the last review that it would have been alot better if you worked out a mini-plot a little better... Keep it up though - overall you did a really good job.
Great job!
You've got a great style, very nice use of raster images. I'm not so sure about your political ideas - I'm not really sure which way you're going with this but your work is great! Are you actually planning on creating a full length story or will the trailer be the end of it? I'd really like to see more of your work as you are very talented. The background music was appropriate and of good quality but the voice-over needs a little work - not much mind you - maybe just a few filters to clean em up a little, add a little (little) reverb for ambience - that sort of thing..
Overall excellent job...
Keep 'em coming.
Really good for an early try!
Feedback/suggestions: work a little more on the tweens as they could look a little better - consider optimizing your artwork to remove some of the jagged parts - although it was very simple - looked like a few simple tweens - I liked the way the water with the blood looked on the way into the bay - good job on that. Overall a pretty good submission - better by far than alot of crap that comes through the portal!
Keep it up!
I agree with the bit about the submissions lately
I very much agree - I've seen alot of really CRAPPY submissions get high marks just because they have stick fighters, clocks, fruit or whatever else the flavor of the week is...
Overall I think you did a decent job, the animation of the mouth started getting a little annoying after a bit - too fast - but either way - I hope you continue to submit!
good job!
thanks ^^
Chronicles of the hood huh?
illustrations weren't too bad but the music and the voice overs sucked. I don't understand how you could get the music to play clearly and yet completely fu*k up the voice quality? You had to have tried to get it that bad!
Keep smokin' that crack! - and stay away from flash for a while...
peace homie... please don't come swiftly though the shadows like a hawk to kill me later with your pinky toe I'm BEGGING ya! let me LIVE!
Really good submission
good graphics - animation was well done - I personally didn't care for the music but it did seem to fit well. Great job on this!
Unusual - and original
Good job! - Very unusual - dry humor - original (very good) so many people submit the same old crap - it's good to see something new. Your characters look good - the lip sync was done very well - all around good job. Keep it up!
I do all of the above. I mean it. I can back it up too.
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