WTF were you thinking?
OK - first of all, try to be original once and a while - it's nice.
This wasn't the WORST animation I've seen but it didn't look like you really tried all that hard... and the scariest is that you were talking like this was going to be the first of some new hit up and coming series??? At the VERY least get a decent mic and try not to blow your little ritalin laced cheeto breath directly into it while you're screaming your lines - it tends to cause a little distortion - but you knew that...