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[ozone = nice]

And your lucky to get the "1"...

Man I've seen some pointless, crappy, non-substantial wastes of bandwidth in my time ... and this was one of them...
I didn't laugh, I didn't cry - it stank and it sucked...
yeah yeah yeah I know I know - just like my mom right? - well if you do decide to rant back at me then at least make it a good one!

unwellpuss responds:

Why would I rant. Your speaking the truth LOL

[Cool Things 398]

I agree with the bit about the submissions lately

I very much agree - I've seen alot of really CRAPPY submissions get high marks just because they have stick fighters, clocks, fruit or whatever else the flavor of the week is...

Overall I think you did a decent job, the animation of the mouth started getting a little annoying after a bit - too fast - but either way - I hope you continue to submit!

good job!

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

thanks ^^

[A Simple Line 7]

Awesome!

Awesome submission!

TOXIC-BOMB responds:

thank you! :)

[The Hold On Dream]

First movie... really?

If it actually is (one of) your first movies then you have amazing potential - try cleaning up your drawings a bit - they were a little too rough around the edges - if you clean them up you can decrease your file sizes quite a bit... maybe try optimizing the vectors - this can sometimes help alot and may even suit your style at higher settings with multiple passes... All around halfway decent submission though - keep it up!

spellbound55 responds:

thanks for the input, though i dont know anything about vectors or passes - ill try and figure it out for my next one though..

[SnakeII]

Not terrible - not fantastic ...

I think that if you developed the idea a bit more and made this animation a bit longer it would be alot better... The last reviewer said something like - "not?bad?game?" - game?? did I completely miss something here? - I looked (and once more as well) but I saw only a short animation... Oh well - like I said - nothing awesome about this but I've seen much worse...

NotSoFunny responds:

Did you not see the big blinking sign which saids "CLICK HERE FOR OTHER VERSION"???? Man, do I have to go over to your house and put my fat fingers on your monitor for you to see it!
Forget it, your a hopeless case it seems... :-(

[Stevie and Zoya Part 2]

Keep it up!

Same as my review for part 1.

Great new set of swf's.

aceconrad responds:

see you at the thugfest N.Y.

[Stevie and Zoya Part 1]

Great submission - cool style

The rasterized bitmaps worked well for this piece. Very different from the usual stick fight, 1,000 ways for a stick to die, pull my sticks finger and the new adventures of Mr. Stick pt. 1 movies that I keep seeing here...
Great style, go with it - a little punky - a little urbanesque - and a little Aeon Fluxish...

Keep it up!

aceconrad responds:

thanks...thryin to get trippy...y'know..

[To Be Human III]

Sorry, nothing there...

OK, apologies in advance in case I get all rabid here...
I don't know what anyone was talking about with the whole 'a movie with a moral' crap - there wasn't anything there - this was psuedo-political fluff - there really wasn't any clear message there - hold on - let me check one more time..... Nope! ... the "message" was way too soft to be felt in any real way - the pictures weren't great and if you're trying to 'reach people' with a 'message' then at least check your spelling - SPEECH is not spelled with an "A" and BEFORE has an "E" at the end of it... But I guess it's not really your fault - I mean the education system sucks - really bad - because your parents' generation really let you down... Even sadder is that this feedback has more of a statement in it than your animation did...

Magosis responds:

(first of all yea i have bad spelling i'm aware of that but this mivie had a dead line since it was a school project and i didn't have time to spell check it, as for this review i just don't think enough of what u have to say to bother)

you were doing good until u made an ass of your self. lets see u started off politely debatign the validity of the message, then instead of continueing with that u started attacking my intelligence. then u just our right insulted my work. well let's make this simple io chose to read your other reviews and check your profile before i continued this response, in each of your reviews you are condesending and yet u still have no flash work to be seen. if you are so much better prove it, i'm not saying for you to be a member here you should need to make flash but i think you should try and show some respect.